導(dǎo)語：奧數(shù)網(wǎng)給同學(xué)們匯總了小學(xué)英語作文范文及點(diǎn)評(píng)，希望同學(xué)們的英語學(xué)習(xí)有所幫助。以下為范文原文：

　　My grandma raises a hen, and she sometimes brings the fresh eggs to us. The eggs taste different from the one sold in the market, they taste delicious. So I decide to have a look at how the hen has the eggs. Every morning, I will go to the hen, and I will see the eggs under her body, it makes me feel like the magic.

　　我奶奶養(yǎng)了一只母雞,她有時(shí)會(huì)給我們帶來新鮮的雞蛋。雞蛋的味道不同于在市場(chǎng)上出售的,味道很好吃。所以我決定看看母雞下蛋。每天早上,我要去觀看母雞,我看到一些雞蛋下她的身子下面,這讓我感覺像魔法。